-u_queen-, August 31st, 2009, 11:28 pm
Smile? Is that Near? Smiling? O_OU
I don't know, but I think you have changed the personalities of characters too much.
I don't complain about the son of L, but if you check the original oneshot that shows Near as a 19 years old boy, you can get what I'm saying.
About the smile Nears personality makes him a tad bit sadistic, though this case is obviously very serious he likes to enjoy a little violence here and there. Then again is is just a comic I made for fun. Not to be taken seriously. ^^
lovely I, personally, love this comic so far, and, as a huge fan of Deathnote, and a huge fan of L, I think you've done a fabulous job, and I also love your drawing style, while it's nothing like the original DeathNote(what is) it's fabulous anyway and has it's own DeathNote-ish feel to is and I must congratulate you on a job well done!